Friday, February 22, 2008

Rani

This kavita is dedicated to my bangalore friends(specially chotu singh from whom I learned how to use this term) and all the ranis in whose love we grew up.



pehli nazar dekhte hi suru go gayi apni kahani
tere roop ko dekh fisal gayi meri jawani
tere naino se ghayal hokar baat humne maani
tum hi ho mere dil ki rani

pilaya tune kitno ko ghat ghat ka pani,
phir bhi hai duniya teri diwani
bas ek baar ban ja meri rani
phir roz pilaunga tujhe special neembu pani

tere aane se khushaal meri zindagani
rang birangi lage hai duniya saari
ab to tere sang hi jeene marne ki hai maine thani
kyon ki tum ho meri rani

tere pyar ne ufaan hai maari
tere liye kuraban meri mehbooba poorani
tere sang hi shaadi mujhko banani
zindagi tere saath hai beetani

ab der na karo bharne mein hami
ban jayo sada ke liye meri maharani warna
hum dhoondh lege koi doosri sayani
jo banegi mere dil ki rani.

7 comments:

Anshu said...

It is high time ..u sud get married now...

Shweta Khare said...

With due care it has been observed that the author is detoriating in his version of writing.Initial appreciation has made the poet desperate for such a childish attempt,but as everything has sm thing +ve in store the subtle sacrifice of old for new "RANI" is worth,it signifies that there existed one & that options r open. This is an honest confession from the poet to be noted My Lord.

Maverick said...

The author just want to show his nonchalance attitude towards love to make it humorous.

Debarshi said...

With due respect to Mr chotu SINGH and his beloved RANIS , who do you think the poet is highly inspired by? Or is this just another "mrigtrishna" the poet is running after in search of his "kalpanik" rani
"milwao kabhi phursat se aapni rani ; hum bhi batayenge kaise poori karni hai kahani "

Kaushik said...

ajay baden main kaun mil gayi tumhe.tu to kush nasib ho bhai na mysore na blore tumhe woh mili swiz main. enjoy maddi , i need treat now

Unknown said...

Arey janab! Phod diye ho!!! Aapki rani lagti hai badi mastani!!

A learner said...

By God...dil jeet lia is post ne to !!